# LinkedIn rewrite — Morgan Ellison

> **DEMO - fictional, sample content.**  
> Fictional job seeker. Not a real LinkedIn profile. No follower counts, endorsements, or “Top Voice” badges.

**Target:** Marketing Coordinator roles in NYC · sample posting: Northwind Digital Media

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## Headline — before (weak)

```text
Marketing Assistant | Looking for opportunities | NYC
```

## Headline — after (sharper)

```text
Marketing Coordinator–track · Tuesday Drop emails, social calendars & event run-of-show · Brooklyn
```

*Why it works:* Names the target level, drops in a distinctive artifact (“Tuesday Drop”), lists the three workstreams, parks the city at the end. No “open to work” mush in the headline itself.

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## About — before (weak)

```text
Hard-working marketing assistant in NYC. Experienced with social media,
email, and events. Team player looking for my next role where I can grow
and contribute. Open to marketing coordinator or similar positions.
Feel free to connect!
```

## About — after (distinctive voice)

```text
I keep small marketing teams on schedule.

Right now I run the weekly Instagram calendar and the Tuesday Drop
newsletter for Brightline Retail Group (fictional DEMO employer) — a
three-shop home-goods retailer in NYC. I draft, QA, schedule, and make
sure the Sheet in standup matches reality. I also own day-of run-of-show
for a handful of in-store and community events each year.

Before that: floor sales at North Pier Outfitters on the Brooklyn
waterfront (fictional), where I learned to explain products without the
jargon. And a campus paper internship writing arts & nightlife shorts
under deadline.

I’m looking for Marketing Coordinator roles in New York where calendar
ownership, clear writing, and follow-through matter more than a highlight
reel of invented metrics.

DEMO - fictional, sample content. No awards, follower counts, or
client-result claims appear here on purpose.
```

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## Featured / extras (for a real build — not invented here)

- Pin the one-page PDF resume (label it sample if used in a portfolio).  
- Do **not** invent recommendations or view counts in demos.  
- Mirror the resume tools list in Skills; only claim what is honest for a real person.

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*DEMO - fictional, sample content.*